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I thought I heard it, a cry torn from an
innocent throat, the Night's luminous fringe
was blemished by the wicked sounds of cruelty
cannibalizing the innocent, broken cries
pitching high pain and fear were all she had
to give as her life was raped by a monster,
cold and cowardly he cloaked his cruel crime
in shadow, this innocent's light soon flickered
as another blow left her broken, her innocence
raped, a soul purely bled died this Night...
and the Silence that followed was so chilling
and final...and I cried as I heard this murder
of innocence, I cried for she who no longer cried.

May 29, 2012
© Jewel MoonSilver Knight - All Rights Reserved.
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A few nights ago I heard what sounded like a dog was being murdered...it was a warm night and when I was standing out on my balcony I could hear these loud crashes and bangs and a little dog yelping...it sounded it was being murdered. But I couldn't pinpoint exactly where it was coming from-this is a big apartment with lots of outside grounds surrounding it-so I didn't know what to do to help. And then soon all I heard was silence. I never knew that silence could be so cruel and final...and I cried.
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~scribblingnooly Jun 18, 2012  Professional
A harrowing poem..those little moments that impact so deeply. Cats and foxes can make pretty agonising cries when they are mating...sound like a baby screaming at times, maybe it was something like that? :hug:
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I hope so...it would be better for me to think that it was something innocent like that for what I've heard...but at the time it just sounded like a dog was being beaten. I kept hearing loud crashes and then a dog yelping as if he was being thrown around...I hope it wasn't what I heard and there was some other explanation. :icongrauerwolf:

I have heard what sounds like a pack of wild coyotes or werewolves...I've never heard cats mating before but I've heard that it does sound like a baby crying.
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~scribblingnooly Jun 19, 2012  Professional
I hear foxes in the night sometime...that can be a very strange and unsettling sound. I hope no one was mistreating an animal..karma has a way of balancing that..I love dogs, they are so loyal and unconditionally loving. How anyone can abuse that is beyond me.
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Animals possess a soul of pure innocence, truth and trust and love. Only someone without a soul would abuse that...:( I believe in Karma too. Karma will get them in the end...
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~Avenvia Jun 15, 2012  Student Writer
I hope that the dog wasn't actually being murdered, and there was a perfectly innocent explanation for the noises you heard.

You really capture the feel of the noise against the sudden silence in this poem.
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I hope so too. You never know in these buildings, there's a lot of creepy people around. That's why I don't socialize around here...I actually went outside of the building to see if I could see anything. But it was dark and I didn't think it was a good idea for me to wander in the dark and in the direction that I thought a crime had just taken place...:iconbrokenheartplz:

I'm glad you liked the poem. :iconhappycat-plz: :heart: :iconhappyowlplz:
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~Avenvia Jun 16, 2012  Student Writer
I think you made the right choice there, even if it wasn't easy. It's a shame that you don't live in a nicer neighbourhood.
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My neighborhood may not be the best, but I love how I've decorated my apartment. And people are amazed too, they feel such a sense of peace and soothing calm when they come over. (It must be from all the natural energy from the animals) And a pychic friend, the first time she came over she said she could see all these colorful lights floating around, and she said my home was filled with fairies and nature spirits. I've made my home a sanctuary from the outside world. I just wish all animals could live with people who loved them. :iconmypleasure:
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Mood: Rage *TheDarkenedBride Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
such cruelty!
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