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A poem of pain and also of healing and hope.

This poem was inspired by "Crystal Thorn" by Creaking-door
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Avenvia Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Student Writer
Ah, I miss Creaking-door, the style of this reminds me greatly of him, though it's also very much infused with your own unique way with words. You combine gentle imagery with passion extremely well.
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Yes, I too very much miss Creaking-door...for a few weeks after his offical departure on January 16, I was still in moderate contact with him through notes because he said he could still read notes...but now he can't so I haven't been in contact with him since February 5. I miss him greatly too, he was my best friend not just on DA but in my real life as well. I really don't have much social contact in real life. Every time I see that someone has sent me a note I keep hoping that it will be from him saying that his health has improved. I have been having a difficult time adjusting to his absence, but I sincerely hope he will get better. I wish him the best in life, with health and healing, love and funny times. I told him in a note that I hoped he would meet a unicorn that would heal him with the magical custard it spurts from its horn.

I'm happy that you liked this poem inspired by one of his. I really liked the rhymes in this but I got some comments from people who thought it would be better if it was written free-verse style. Agnes doesn't think so. What do you think?
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Avenvia Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah, he introduced me to you and sometimes I think he pointed people my way, too, but obviously I can't be sure. It's also his influence that pushed me to become the kind of watcher I am, and to regularly interact with people here until I feel like I know them.

Personally, I like the rhyme because I like traditional forms - they can be quite rare. But it might be interesting to see you write about the same ideas and themes in free verse too, so I wouldn't really object to that =)
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012
Creaking-door was a rare treasure on DA. He had such a strong committment to the people he watched over, commenting on everything. I want to be that kind of watcher too, and I will to those who will respond with comments on my poems too...I sincerely hope his health improves and maybe we will hear from him again. It's a rare gift to be able to touch the hearts of people you've never met, and that's the kind of gift that Rob gave to me and I'm sure to others. He made me feel special.
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Avenvia Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Student Writer
I'm with you on that, he was indeed a rare person on here who really knew how to make friendships with his watchers.
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mysticbliss11 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very powerful and full of visual emotion. Easily one of the best pieces I've seen in a long time.
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
Thank-you very much for the high praise! I'm happy that it touched you so...
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TheSilentMistress Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
A beautiful poem.
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NocturneJewel Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012
Thank-you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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TheSilentMistress Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
No problem.
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