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One May Morning I tasted the Dawn with her rosy
nuptuals, trembling and weeping and breathing
through the vestal veins of my home, I tasted
the Dawn, tissue-tied to my bridal senses, I tasted
her, I felt her, with cream and crimson carnations
heightening my Poet's circulation I lived her,
as my eyelids opened and left behind the poverty
of dry absence-my heart was maternally moistened,
my newly awakened eyes were liberally misted by
the stimulating sight I saw, the precious sight of
Odyssey's eggs caught in the perfect pose of hatching.

One by one little heads appeared, slicked wet by
the silent oozing of their egg fluid, thick like
marmalade they oozed clear and glistening, slowly
did little life start to emerge from this primal
break in their eggshell womb, with tiny flickering
tongues they tasted the texture of the newly born
Day, of an uncertain world they were preparing to
slither into, and with each fleshly flicker of their
tongues they touched the canvas of my heart-washed
clear in the tears of Creation, my Poetry pours
pure from my heartbeat river, a dewy rainbow rhythm
full of the birthing essence of Milk and Blood,
these little snakelings that are as freshly born
as the Dawn, they are the precious children of
my enduring Love, my Faith, my Hope.

June 7, 2006
© Jewel MoonSilver Knight - All Rights Reserved.
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I wrote this poem in 2006 during my first year of having little snake babies. It was such an amazing experience to wake up one morning, checking on my eggs, and seeing little snake heads peeking through the tiny slits they made in their egg shells, and flicking their tongues through the slits too!

It's getting very close for my current snake eggs to hatch...they're 7.5 weeks old and all look well. I can tell they're getting close to hatching because some are starting to dimple inwards. Snake eggs start to lose their perfect oval shape and start to dimple inwards a few days before hatching. This is because the yolk is being absorbed into the snakeling's body.

This is such an exciting time. I've been checking on the eggs several times a day.


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*CeeNova Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved it! I just love poems about new life--you captured the essence of birth and the pure beauty of it perfectly!
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:iconnocturnejewel:
Thank-you Charissa! :D Seeing new life take place in my home touches my heart so deeply...
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*halcyonshores Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know you have welcomed new, beautiful life already and this poem, is yet another wondrous hymn
your Beautiful soul sings for the world to listen to and hope with. :heart:
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Again, you've touched me with your kindness and beautiful words! Thank-you for your beautiful friendship here...:huggle:
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*halcyonshores Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Right back at you, dear and loving Poetess. :iconbeauroseplz:
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A write so full of wondrous love and awe for the your snakeling babes. You make their delivery sound so special and touching, the reader can totally relate to your joy. :)
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:iconnocturnejewel:
Thank-you! I'm happy that you liked this poem, the eggs are 8 weeks old and I'm still checking on them several times a day. Very exciting...
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:iconwhimsicalworks:
Is keeping so many exotic creatures part of your job, if not, it should be! :D
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:iconnocturnejewel:
It's my love and my passion!
They're my family.:love:
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