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I unzip the seams of my soul and let out Winter,
her chilly chaos chastises tonight to give up her
solitude to the riot of white that reins outside
my frostbitten window, erasing Summer's fingerprints
and extinguishing Autumn's kindle, Winter looks
at me with the second sight of her arctic owl eyes,
and I know that there will come a time when the
moments of my remaining mortality will clink against
Eternity-Winter's lovechild-and I will come away
from the encounter one step closer to washing my
mistakes clean, until my soul beams ambrosia white...

Once I was lost, once I was unloved-even by myself,
but snowflakes shivered out of my pockets and endeared
me with the poetry they possessed, I caught a glimmer
of solstice glamour in their symmetry, I tried to
catch their warm white whispers on my tangerine tongue,
but their purity was too vivid I had to look away...
to the little lacy lovelies of Winter faeries melting
into my skin, sweet and wildly beckoning I felt them
shear my soul into snowflakes, and then I knew that
the forfeited possibilities of my past can't hold me
back from reclaiming myself, the Hopes I watched fizzle
away before my down cast eyes can't keep me from my
renewable growth, or even to touch a Sky where the
Hurt is cocooned and Healing is given birth from this
Wintry Womb, maybe one day I will learn to love myself
better than anyone else can, and then I will know
what it's like to possess the soul of a snowflake...

December 26, 2012
© Jewel MoonSilver Knight - All rights reserved.

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Mood: Love *TheDarkenedBride Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
how lovely it sounds - the faith there's a way to wash our mistakes clean :)
btw. this piece reminds me of the Batman movie with Michelle Pfeiffer as Catwoman :lightbulb: I admit sometimes my brain works strangely :XD:
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:iconnocturnejewel:
"Batman Returns"! That is my favorite Batman movie! :iconcatwomanplz: But I must admit, I donèt know how it relates to the poem, but that's okay...brains that work differently are the ones that write the most beautiful poetry. :love:

May the faith of a snowflake always be with you-in spirit- since it's now Spring.
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:iconbelarosewolf:
~BelaRoseWolf Jan 21, 2013  Student Writer
This piece flows so wonderfully! :D Also, winter is my favorite season, so this just made me smile... Amazing work!
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:iconnocturnejewel:
Thank-you so much for that! :iconcraciun6: Yes, I really love Winter-the cold and all the snow-so much better to the heat of Summer. :( In fact, we're supposed to get snow today. I'm looking forward to going for a walk in it. :iconcip16: I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. :iconblueheartplz:
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:iconbelarosewolf:
~BelaRoseWolf Jan 26, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome! ^^ And I just had lots of snow where I live, and it even knocked out my internet for a few hours, but I love it!
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:iconnocturnejewel:
Hooray for snow! :iconcraciun6:
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:icondragonschest:
=DragonsChest Jan 11, 2013  Professional Writer
'Eternity-Winter's lovechild-and I will come away
from the encounter one step closer to washing my
mistakes clean, until my soul beams ambrosia white...'

One of my favorite verses of poetry ever... :heart:
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:iconnocturnejewel:
Thank-you so much David! :hug:
I love those lines, it's nice to hear that others do too. :iconsnowflakesplz:
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=DragonsChest Jan 19, 2013  Professional Writer
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:icondarija9:
So beautiful :rose:
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