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Autumn, Autumn, my little boy gecko
blazing brighter than the Twilight Sun,
faster by far you are than the falling
toy of Autumn leaves-but sweeter than
maple sugar you can be, on a day as
subtle as the retreat of Winter's shade
you must have been in a restless mood,
full of sprintime spunk and fiesty show,
for when I attempted to remove you from
your rustic home so I may complete my
cleansing duties you put on a show of
such freaky woe I had never seen before!

Autumn, Autumn, wearied of your tail
you must have been for my maternal care
failed to calm the panic fluttering in
your little breast-until finally you
dropped your slender tail, with sad
surprise I watched it flop and twitch
as it slowly died from being separated
from its native owner, and only then
did a friendly calmness luxuriate in you,
how your mood fluctuates like the dear
season I named you for, Autumn, oh Autumn,
wearied of your tail you must have been!

April 14, 2006
© Jewel MoonSilver Knight - All rights reserved.
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Written in 2006 after Autumn, my male crested gecko at the time, suddenly dropped his tail when I was trying to remove him from his tank so I could clean it. It was the first time I ever saw this happen. I guess I surprised him...and then he surprised me.

I like the flow and rhyme of this poem.
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*TheDarkenedBride May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, that must have been a rare sight to say the least...
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:iconnocturnejewel:
Haha, actually it turned out to be not so rare a sight!:laughing: This gecko was the first that I saw drop his tail but he wasn't the last. I think I've seen this about 6 times since I wrote this poem in 2006. Very shocking sight, to see this tail twitching around on the floor. :iconbananaloveplz:
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*TheDarkenedBride May 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aaaaaaaaaaaaaa :iconoooplz: lol
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~Avenvia Apr 26, 2012  Student Writer
Tail dropping sounds a little creepy! I liked the style of the narrating voice in this, though; it made it seem humorous and a good description of such a strange event!
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:iconnocturnejewel:
You're back! I've missed hearing from you, I hope you're well and having fun over there...:heart:

It's quite a sight to see, when a lizard drops its tail. It twitches and convulses on the floor like some alien life form! (The tail, not the lizard I hope).

I'm glad you liked the way I wrote this poem and thanks for the favorite. :iconsparklyroseplz:
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~Avenvia Apr 27, 2012  Student Writer
I've been very busy, and not long until summer so I'll be busier still! It's my birthday next week so I doubt I'll be around much then since I'm going out of town for a few days to celebrate it.

That... sounds very strange. I'm glad people don't do that!
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:iconnocturnejewel:
I'll wish you Happy birthday now then!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I hope you have a wonderful day filled with lots of love and chocolatey delights!:party::iconbutterflyplz::party::iconwineplz::party::iconwineplz::party::iconbutterflyplz::party:
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~Avenvia Apr 27, 2012  Student Writer
Wow, thank-you! I know it must be my second year of being on this account coming up too, because it was a few days before my birthday that I made it. Only I didn't tell anyone cuz I didn't want to sound self-centered =P
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:iconnocturnejewel:
Is this your 19 or 20th birthday? That's a big one, you're no longer a teenager! I hope you have lots of fun! :iconbatglompplz:

My birthday's coming up on May 25 and I've started to think what I wanted to do this year, and I'm not sure...:heart:
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~Avenvia Apr 27, 2012  Student Writer
My nineteenth; no quite twenty yet! Not sure I'm looking forward to my twentieth, since I really won't feel like a kid anymore then...

Ah, what do you normally do? I normally hate to go out or celebrate it at all, really. I don't like being the centre of attention =)
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